Anvil - TEM Eye of the Abecean (Refit)[Toma][Reviewed]
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Anvil - TEM Eye of the Abecean (Refit)[Toma][Reviewed]
TEM Eye of the Abecean is a powerful old galleon, and the flagship of the West Navy. Age has taken its toll on the vessel, though, and the cash-strapped Navy has not prioritized its upkeep. Today, the Eye rarely leaves its home port except for occasional rally-the-flag cruises along the Charach-Rihad-Anvil triangle.
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Very dirty, very wip update file. Had to scrap some of the layout I was going for to make what's left fit; will rebuild over the next 4-5 days.
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- PC_TEM_Eye_of_the_Abecean_wip.esp
- (1.04 MiB) Downloaded 14 times
Ready for review.
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- PC_TEM_Eye_of_the_Abecean_v3.esp
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Pushing back into indev after conversation with Exovian
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Dropping; I've held this too long without progress. Comments from Tani via Discord regarding needed changes are as follows:
"It looks mostly good but it doesn't have any of the hull shelves or interior walls that all the other galleons do, which makes it stand out quite a bit and feel a bit sparse despite the cluttering. I think most of what you've done with it can be retained, just maybe replacing some of the hammocks and tables with shelving and adding 1-2 closed off areas in the hold."
The V3 version uploaded is still the most recent.
"It looks mostly good but it doesn't have any of the hull shelves or interior walls that all the other galleons do, which makes it stand out quite a bit and feel a bit sparse despite the cluttering. I think most of what you've done with it can be retained, just maybe replacing some of the hammocks and tables with shelving and adding 1-2 closed off areas in the hold."
The V3 version uploaded is still the most recent.
Taking it from Exovian.
Ready for review! Refit changes:
- reworked workshop area into dining room, preserving small area of it for workshop
- dining area from above almost entirely moved downstairs (see above) to give space to one closed room with storage
- closed off the ending part of main level
- added doors to small room
Aimed to meet Exovian's intentional design idea on open ship (bringing its old age this way) and Tani's request to make it more closed off half-way. Hopefully it does the work well.
- reworked workshop area into dining room, preserving small area of it for workshop
- dining area from above almost entirely moved downstairs (see above) to give space to one closed room with storage
- closed off the ending part of main level
- added doors to small room
Aimed to meet Exovian's intentional design idea on open ship (bringing its old age this way) and Tani's request to make it more closed off half-way. Hopefully it does the work well.
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- PC_TEM_Eye_of_the_Abecean_v5_final.esp
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Fixed door bleeding into gratings when opened, now it opens reversely.
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- PC_TEM_Eye_of_the_Abecean_v5_final.esp
- R4R
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Clean: Yes
Fits exterior: Yes
Name: PC_TEM Eye of the Abecean: Hold / Cabin (reviewed together)
Lighting: Good
Northmarker: Yes
Pathgrid: Good
Illegal to Sleep Here:
Gridsnap: Yes
Bleeders:
- T_MwCom_Var_Bls2Empty
- T_Imp_ColClayPot_01
- Misc_Inkwell
- furn_com_rm_chair_03
- T_Imp_Drink_RicebeerMori_01
- com_chest_01
- T_Imp_ColClayPlatter_01
- furn_com_p_table_01
- T_Com_Furn_WeaponRack_01 (x3)
- T_MwCom_Var_Bls2Fish
- T_Imp_Legion_Saber_01
- T_Imp_Legion_Mace_01
- T_Imp_SetHarbor_Sailcloth_01
- T_Com_Lute_01
- T_Imp_ColClayPot_01
- T_Com_Compass_02
- T_IngFood_FishPike_01
- misc_com_silverware_knife
- T_Imp_CarvedWoodTray_01
Floaters:
- sc_paper plain
- misc_uni_pillow_01
- T_Imp_SilverWareKnife_01
- T_Imp_ColClayPlate_02
- T_Imp_ColClayBottle_01 (x2)
- Furn_Com_Kegstand
- T_CyrImp_FurnM_Ds1Paper
- T_Com_Spyglass01
- Misc_Imp_Silverware_Cup_01
- T_Bk_StirkHistoriesPC
Minimap: good
Other:
- added bucket
- Added windows
- added dedication plaque
Merge notes:
- Newspaper needs to be replaced later
Fits exterior: Yes
Name: PC_TEM Eye of the Abecean: Hold / Cabin (reviewed together)
Lighting: Good
Northmarker: Yes
Pathgrid: Good
Illegal to Sleep Here:
Gridsnap: Yes
Bleeders:
- T_MwCom_Var_Bls2Empty
- T_Imp_ColClayPot_01
- Misc_Inkwell
- furn_com_rm_chair_03
- T_Imp_Drink_RicebeerMori_01
- com_chest_01
- T_Imp_ColClayPlatter_01
- furn_com_p_table_01
- T_Com_Furn_WeaponRack_01 (x3)
- T_MwCom_Var_Bls2Fish
- T_Imp_Legion_Saber_01
- T_Imp_Legion_Mace_01
- T_Imp_SetHarbor_Sailcloth_01
- T_Com_Lute_01
- T_Imp_ColClayPot_01
- T_Com_Compass_02
- T_IngFood_FishPike_01
- misc_com_silverware_knife
- T_Imp_CarvedWoodTray_01
Floaters:
- sc_paper plain
- misc_uni_pillow_01
- T_Imp_SilverWareKnife_01
- T_Imp_ColClayPlate_02
- T_Imp_ColClayBottle_01 (x2)
- Furn_Com_Kegstand
- T_CyrImp_FurnM_Ds1Paper
- T_Com_Spyglass01
- Misc_Imp_Silverware_Cup_01
- T_Bk_StirkHistoriesPC
Minimap: good
Other:
- added bucket
- Added windows
- added dedication plaque
Merge notes:
- Newspaper needs to be replaced later
- Attachments
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- PC_TEM_Eye_of_the_Abecean_v5_final(1).esp
- (41.56 KiB) Downloaded 4 times
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